Sunday, March 16, 2008

Let's Get Started

I think that sometimes the most difficult parts of a paper like this are the beginning and the ending. How do I get started? How do I really pull it together at the end? Those are good questions.

I think a good way to start is to go back to the funnel. Start broad. For example, you could begin by talking about how many high school students beginning thinking about their futures and exploring different career options. From there, narrow it down to why the career you have researched is a good option. Narrow it even further by discussing the needed characteristics that might benefit the career you have chosen. Let's see...

It is natural for high school students to begin thinking about potential careers as they approach graduation. While some students may know exactly what they want to do, other students may not have any idea. It is important for a student to explore different options as he considers what he would like to do. He may want to ask his parents or close friends what they can envision him doing. He may want to look at his personal passions and investigate paths that stem from his own creative bents. He will certainly want to seek direction from the Lord. For example, a student who has invested many years playing baseball could begin researching different careers that would be linked to that interest. He might consider playing professional baseball, becoming a sports journalist, selling sports-related products, or studying physical therapy for sports injuries. If he loves kids and teaching them how to play the game as much as he loves playing it himself, he might consider coaching. Becoming a baseball coach is [blah blah blah]


This would be the introductory paragraph about becoming a baseball coach.

Now, keep reading and pay attention: This is not how you HAVE TO begin your paper. This is just an idea.


(And yes, Nathan, it had to be about baseball.)

9 comments:

Unknown said...

um... can I use everything in red at the begining of my paper? lol I can use it as a quote! Direct quote from Mrs. Powell-San

Woot! First Comment~!

<3 Megumay

Anonymous said...

Hello Mrs.P♥
I just wanted to let you know that I have been working really hard on my paper this last week!...It was def hard getting it all together and stuff, but i think that it might have turned out ok=]lol!..
cya at class!..YIPPEE!♥

P.S.you rock my socks off!..lol(not the red sox mrs.P, my actuall socks!..LOL)...

LOVE YOU!
HANNAH53♥+=)Bhappy!

Anonymous said...

Hey Mrs Powell!
I am actually really excited because I didn't wait until today to start doing my work.. not that I waited before or anything.. ;)
see you tomorrow!
♥ Jen Ten

Anonymous said...

ok i know we probably already talked about this, but let's say i'm using times... for example:
"If the show is live then they spend from 4:00 a.m. to 5:55 a.m. practicing reading their stories"
what do i do?
love jen

Rebecca Ingram Powell said...

Jen,

You have the times down the way that I would put them. I think that's okay. Another option would be to say, "If the show is live, they spend up to two hours before practicing reading their stories."

~Mrs. P

Anonymous said...

Okay thanks:) Just making sure it was okay to put a.m. and stuff!!
see you tomorrow!
Jen

Anonymous said...

I think my draft is done. It dosn't have to be 2,000 words yet, does it? I can't remember.

Happy St. Patricks Day-
-Whitney

Anonymous said...

So just let me know if I end up leaving too many comments lol, but on the footnotes, do we have to put them on anything besides quotes?

Rebecca Ingram Powell said...

Hi Whitney,

A draft is like a practice paper. It's like a trial run. Itshould be as close to 2000 words as possible.

Jen,
In our class, your endnotes are there for direct quotes.

I'm posting more info this afternoon, so keep checking this blog!

~Mrs. P