Thursday, September 18, 2008

CORRECTED COMMA PARAGRAPH

Blake, Parker, and Debbie seemed to have a great time at the wedding, which took place in Wakefield, Massachusetts, on May 2, 2007. Although most of the older people thought the music was good, but too loud, the young people enjoyed dancing to whatever music the DJ played. Peter said, "We told the DJ to tone it down, but the kids kept telling him to make it louder." The DJ, a peculiar, disheveled fellow, played whatever they suggested.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

yep..I got on here..lol.

Anonymous said...

just blogging Mrs. Powell...

Anonymous said...

I didn't know if we were supposed to leave a comment this week, but just in case...HI!

Rebecca Ingram Powell said...

Thanks, Lauren!

You people are supposed to comment at least once EVERY week!

I think that info is on the syllabus!

Kent-_-V said...

thanks, you rock